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xD aww Shadow is so smooth with girls...DIDN'T your mummy tell you not to leave girls suddenly like that?! D8 xD nah they will meet again
Tell me if arrows pointing panels' reading order are required on last three panels and whether you can recognize it's shadows thoughts in the square bubble on the third panel and can you also get what he means? and can you also point out any horrible English mistakes
aaand..I didn't like this page as much as the last one xD tell me if i should make it have darker bg? though i didn't want the bg to have too much attention...
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Tell me if arrows pointing panels' reading order are required on last three panels and whether you can recognize it's shadows thoughts in the square bubble on the third panel and can you also get what he means? and can you also point out any horrible English mistakes
aaand..I didn't like this page as much as the last one xD tell me if i should make it have darker bg? though i didn't want the bg to have too much attention...
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~~Story and Characters belong to me~~
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I bet that he must think that her eyes are so beautiful as the stars