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Blue - Page 73

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Like a shadow~~ ;)
Btw white leonine on panel 2 is suppose to be same guy as on this page:Blue - Page 38 or like one of you named him: Kevin (not his official name but his nickname!) I wonder what they are arguing about...
   
 Should I add random bla-bla-ing so show they are arguing or keep the page "silent" to fit the sneaky mood?--(UPDATE) Decided to keep it as it is
     Also.. any thoughts on my new watermark? Should my deviantart address be clearer or is it good?  :) I will add watermark on my works from now on and perhaps update some past pages  and works slowly adding the watermark on them.
 
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Nice idea on Shadow sneaking through the camp with just the one thing in mind: Finding Blue once again.
The silence puts the focus just on the right character: Which is - again - Shadow. Since he doesnt understand the language of the Leonines it is really not neccesary to have them say random things somwhere on this page.

In my opinion: Doing so would just destroy the silence given on the comic page. A sneaking scene with a character who does not understand a foreign language, does not need any words in order to fulfill the given purpose.

Keep it just as it is, as I - and proberbly many others - are happy with your decision.