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Blue - Page  89 by HunterBeingHunted Blue - Page  89 by HunterBeingHunted
Woah, this is the latest I've been with a page probably.. it has been very stressful for me, and that only increases my procrastination.. what a vicious cycle! Now things are a bit better, but there's still thesis... 

Anyway! Finally a page! As many of you guessed it, Blue wants to leave the great pack! Sadly, it is not easy to get an answer out of Shadow. If you were Shadow would you think it is a good idea to leave, or would you convince Blue to stay? 

Also I wonder who's that on the last panel... ;)

Feel free to fix my grammar and English in general~  

UPDATE:  I made the panel borders thicker because one of you suggested it, I may edit rest of the epilogue pages to have also thicker panel borders, just so it looks more consistent. But for now I am not gonna go through all the pages to edit that.
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:iconwille450:
Wille450 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2017
On the road again, I......
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:iconhunterbeinghunted:
HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...Oh? :O
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Wille450 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2017
It's a old classic song that I don't know the name off
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KeksWolf Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Of course he'll say yes!
I don't think they can have own children together, though, they're different species after all. (Then again, I don't know how this works in your universe ^^)
But they can still have a family and I would bet this little puppy on the last panel is going to be part of it :D
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He better! For Blue's sake.. xD
I am hoping to leave that for the reader to interpret as they wish :) 
You are right that adoption could very well be a solution if they can't have kids! But fist you'll have to be lucky enough to find a pup without a family and who is also happy to be adopted! 

Now that would be cute! XD but we'll have to see about that
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mudian1992 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Leave the pack and travel with Blue.....Shadow! A New start awaits you....
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:iconhunterbeinghunted:
HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactly! :D
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liger0schnider Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017
The panels are beautiful!
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:iconhunterbeinghunted:
HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! I am glad you think so! :heart:
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AudeS Featured By Owner May 24, 2017
That definitely is one unhappy pup at the tend. It is funny how much he stands out be being drawn with mostly brown colors and a more defined expression than the other lupines. Naturally, I am going to say this is developing to a new journey for the both, and who knows what the ultimate decision will be? Well, you know, because you got the story outline, but us others have to guess and wait. Which is always worth it.
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I am sure no one can ignore as sad puppy as that one is! I guess it is part of why he stands out so much? + he is sorta in middle of the panel even if not on the foreground!

Yup, we shall see indeed ;) I am really happy to hear you think the pages are worth the wait! :) 
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awesomefox02 Featured By Owner May 24, 2017  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I really hope that they will be ok and Starting a family of their own someday 🌟. Are they going to leave to start a family or they stay 🌟? Now this is getting very interesting to see that and I am now so excited to see page 90 right now 🌟.
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AudeS Featured By Owner May 24, 2017
Ah yes, we are already at 89 pages. Quite a journey, isn't it?
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awesomefox02 Featured By Owner May 24, 2017  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thanks for agreeing with me 🌟.
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GrenadierWolf Featured By Owner May 23, 2017
That puppy looks so sad.
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GrenadierWolf Featured By Owner May 23, 2017
That little puppy looks so sad.
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
he does! :noes:
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GrenadierWolf Featured By Owner May 23, 2017
That puppy looks so sad
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AstarGoldenwing Featured By Owner May 22, 2017
Ah, so that was what Blue had been helping Caligo with - she was teaching him leonine language! I thought that Caligo would want to use Blue in the negotiations somehow, but I suspected that he would try to use her status as Rex's adopted daughter instead. :plotting: Still, I'm glad that the negotiations are being held, and judging by the fact that Blue feels safe enough to leave the pack and travel alone, they probably don't go too bad. On a lighter side, the second panel is so cute. :D
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well at least the leonines won't be demanding her back this way, which is a nicer solution for Blue! :D  and she is kinda helping with the negotiations.. by teaching the language! (and probably by helping to write messages etc)

I guess Blue could have used for the negotiations as leverage (if that was what you were thinking?) That would only work if  her status was still valid after death of Rex, also since leonines do have the upper hand.. they could have tried retrieving her by force or threaten lupines into giving her back to them, so it is not guaranteed it could have worked.  I guess this is a safer route, although not very certain either!

They must be doing something right, or then Blue just has way too much faith in Caligo! :D
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Connor18 Featured By Owner May 19, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Nice work. I love all of the background detail here and the puppy at the end looks upset.
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
he does :C
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MasterofWolves99 Featured By Owner May 18, 2017
BLUE WHY MUST YOU BE SO CUTE! *tightly hugs Blue* But anyways, I think the wolf watching the two from afar could be either a friend of Shadow, or understands their situation. Either way, I am curious to know what will happen next
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well She is a feline, all felines are cute by default! :D

Oh that is a nice way to see it, a positive way! :) 
We will soon see who he is better, however this character has been seen before and he should be recognizable, however I am not expecting people to recognize him too easily since he has been shown so little!
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MasterofWolves99 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2017
Is this her plan to take over the world? D8 ah who cares!

Hehe can't wait
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:iconhunterbeinghunted:
HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hahah XD right, who cares! it's Blue after all! :D 
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0laffson Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
New page! :la:  Believe me, today has been an absolutely horrible day and this page made it way, WAY better! I'm so happy to finally see the story progressing! ^^

So many things happening in this page! It seems Blue wanted indeed to leave, and I think she's right. They lived in the pack for two years and they treated them like dirt for all this time, they have no reason to stay. I wonder if other Lynxians would be more accepting of their relationship...or even another pack! Blue used to lives with Lupines at first, and I'm quite sure her adoptive parents wouldn't have had any problems with her finding a lupine mate, so there are tolerant ones around!
The guy in the last panel looks a lot like Arcus! I hope not to be wrong, or it would mean I see Arcus everywhere :D

Nice to know Caligo is negotiating with the Lupines! Let's hope they decide to trade or something rather than invading Lupines' lands again. ^^  I guess after Rex's death they lost interest, not to mention they could probably have internal conflicts for the succession to the throne too.

Awesome page once again, and very well written! ^^ (Also, I saw both versions and I have to say I like the one with the thicker panel broders)
Also, that poor pup! He deserves a hug, little fluffy thing! D:
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh no! I hope things are better now (surely they must be as i am replying so late XD) Also I am glad to have cheered up your day! :aww: 

You were right about it all along! :D Maybe if they are lucky they could find a pack like that, and you are right, Blue's parents would  not have minded it, otherwise it would have been like forcing her to live her life alone. (as you are unlikely to ever meet other lynxians living in a lupine pack)

and yes that is indeed Arcus! :D (I am glad someone recognized him, though maybe others did too and they jsut didn't point it out)

Pretty much anything is better for lupines than getting slaughtered by leonines! XD
That is very much possible! Blue probably did more to help with the negotiations than she even knows, or likes, since it would have probably been impossible to negotiate with Rex.

Yay! I am glad you like it, maybe I'll edit also the other epilogue pages to have those thicker borders. Maybe someday I edit more pages too, who knows!

he does :c 
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0laffson Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I had failed an exam and a man died in a car accident a few meters away from where I was walking, so it was an horrible day! This page really helped, so thank you. ^^

Good to know some Lupines like Blue's parents seem to understand that, but sadly it seems there are none like that in the Great Pack. Maybe Lupines grew even more wary of all felines in general after their experience with Leonines, compared to how they were when Blue was a kid. It won't be easy for them to find a place to be accepted, poor fluffs!

yay! :D  Now I wonder why he's looking at them so menacingly!

I agree, if the Leonines decided to attack again thins wouldn't end well, better keep them quiet at all costs! Let's hope Caligo will have luck with his peace negotiations.
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(late reply)
uh oh.. that sounds terrible.. I am glad this helped you feel better! :)

that's true! they can only hope for the best... or just survive by themselves! 

Maybe Caligo is ready to go to greater lengths now that he knows how hard it will be to fight them! :noes:
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TechnicolourScribble Featured By Owner Edited May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wonder if the little brown wolf will be important at all, it kind of sticks out design-wise :D
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
All sad puppies stick out and every puppy is important! :D 
Joking aside (even if true)  he is just a background character, if you meant that his placing sticks out on the page, that is on me, I wanted people to be able to see certain details of the life at the camp, some showing some of the aftermath of the battle that show even after 2 years.

If you were talking of the puppy's design, His fur pattern design is actually meant as a cool little detail, because a puppy with same design has been seen earlier in comic ( the detail is not really important to the story, but just something small I wanted to add, that someone sharp eyed maybe able to notice) His emotions here and his last appearance suggest why he may be sad, though that can probably be guessed even without recognizing him.  :)
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TechnicolourScribble Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alright, cool.

I must be watching to much anime lately :)

Now every time I see someone with a specific design I'm just up all like "Ohh....... that must be an important character!" :D

Whenever I'm designing characters for my comic I always like to make them as normal looking as possible, so as not to follow the cliche of if they look flashy then they must be important, so I'm appreciative of the fact that you seem to
follow the same idea :heart:
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's ok! I think speculating about characters as the story progresses is so much fun :D


I do agree on that! However I also find it important to make the main character look interesting  and not dull, because in my opinion looking normal doesn't equal dull or uninteresting.. ofc 'normal' is such a relative term ^^
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AstaraBriarart Featured By Owner May 18, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't wait for the next page! :D
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I try and not to take as long as with this one! :XD:
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AstaraBriarart Featured By Owner May 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
No worries, comics are hard and time consuming so I completely understand! ^^
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Cinus79 Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Darn Dude! You should accept the Blue's decision!
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:iconhunterbeinghunted:
HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactly! Shadow stop stalling and answer her! :D
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:iconmuscle-wolf:
Muscle-Wolf Featured By Owner May 17, 2017
To go with the one you love? No contest to me
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
 That's a fair point! :D 
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awesomefox02 Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Now this is getting very interesting to see that and I am now so excited to see page 90 right now and I really hope that they will Starting a family right now ✨.
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D Lets hope I won't take too long to upload the next page then!
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awesomefox02 Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Cool 😎! Then I will wish you go good luck with your amazing artwork comic book 📚!
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MadMother88 Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
PAGE!
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icongaspplz:
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MadMother88 Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
:lol:
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AgnosticDragon Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I just found this. You have an interesting story and interesting characters. As an American, I found the story touching. We need to be mindful of who we really are and where we really come from. Keep up the good work.
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HunterBeingHunted Featured By Owner May 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! I am very glad you liked the story, it is a fantasy setting but it does indeed have many parallels to american history for example, I am glad it is thought provoking!
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S7alker117 Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Professional Writer
I must say, I do find the art of this comic truly lovely. It is a style you really don't see very day. 

I would like to make two annotations, though. 

First, just a typo, on the second speech bubble of the fifth panel, "And we don't have to know exact place yet." should be "And we don't have to know of a exact place yet." - unless the typo was on purpose, due to her ways with the wolf language. 

Second, I would say that maybe you could make the breaks between the panels wider, to make the art easier to read. At times it seems the panels meld into one another because the break is so narrow and dark - unless that's the point, evidently. 

Apart from that, and as of now, great work! :)
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